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Falling In Love In the Fall

Falling In Love In Autumn (Couplets) Autumn Love is mature and warm Surviving Spring and Summer’s Storms First love blooms in Spring’s first kiss Young hearts lost in natures bliss The Bird of Youth flies high and strong Spring is when we hear his song Summer sun brings reality And no assurance of constancy The Rose is Queen in Summer’s Sun But falls to earth when season’s done Winter is lonely, dark and cold Without Autumns love, as we grow old. Copyright© 2011 Beatrice Boyle, (All rights reserved) For Michael Faolotico’s Contest – Falling In Love In Autumn

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Date: 10/8/2011 8:35:00 PM
Beautifully written Couplet, Beatrice! Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest. Well done! Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:29:00 PM
Congtrats and thank you so much for supporting my contest.. It was a true pleasure to read.. always Michael
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:09:00 PM
A most charming write Beatrice, and worthy of its place in Michaels contest..
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Date: 10/7/2011 12:53:00 PM
an endearing write congrad's on your win. Light 7 love
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Beatrice. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:36:00 PM
Thanks all for your lovely comments. Autumn is my favorite time of year! Bea
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:15:00 PM
Wow, that actually made me smile when I feel so down. Thank you.
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Date: 10/6/2011 2:06:00 PM
How I love the way you describe the mature love surviving through youth, but it ssad to think of winter as dark and lonely, Beatrice. Congratulations on your first-place, first-rate poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/6/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congrats to you on your 1st place win..a lovely poem..BG
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Date: 10/6/2011 9:18:00 AM
I love the last stanza. Congrats, Dinda :)
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Date: 10/6/2011 9:16:00 AM
I love the last stanza. Congrats, Dinda :)
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:58:00 PM
Congrats Beatrice on first place win with this brilliant beauty luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:20:00 PM
Well done, lovely write. I apologize for the delay in congratulating you Beatrice but my internet has been out as well as PS. Thanks Lee
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