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Falling In Love In a Sandwich Shop

Falling in love is really quite simple– The girl ahead of me in line today ordered a small pitcher of beer and one single bag of fritos.

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/29/2023 4:26:00 AM

I thought it's possibly inexplicable what I like about this, but it's written with such charm and eyes wide open wonder of the world that's it's beautiful! I've certainly stood in line and imagined personalities from the way someone has ordered. At its heart I suppose it's falling in love with an aura. A brilliant little pocket of joy

C.W. Bryan
Date: 3/29/2023 8:54:00 AM

It means to much to me to hear you say that. It's a mindset I try to adopt every time I leave the house. Eyes wide open wonder of the world is the only justified vision to me, how lucky to be alive : ) Thank you for the kind words