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Falling In Love

The lightest steps come when love is in bloom, And hearts yearn to open in full display Enter this garden, the time we consume To dissolve and quietly float away Tender fingers merge like a woven lace In anticipation, the coming days Love opens its heart in a warm embrace To face this new world with its blues and grays Where the kindest eyes pierce deep to express To dream of hearts binding ever tighter A sanctuary where lovers confess And the heart once dark is glowing brighter Along the farthest hills where lovers go. Are two silhouettes, with love's afterglow 9/29/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/13/2020 8:33:00 PM
Frederic, So tender and delicate! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:28:00 PM
Frederic, Congrats.. SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 11:29:00 PM
This romantic poem has to be a fave for me Frederic! This is how I felt when I fell for my husband. I was walking on the clouds. Beautiful! Congratulations on your much deserved win!#7
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:59:00 PM
Hi Frederic, Thank you so much for joining in my contest!!! A big congratulations!!! ^_^ Thank you for making me fall in love again with your love story! :O)
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Date: 9/29/2015 3:45:00 PM
simply beautiful!! I just love it!
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Date: 9/29/2015 2:48:00 PM
Very lovely piece Frederic.
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:17:00 PM
- Excellent poem, Frederic ! - Sweet and beautiful ! - (what's the difference between "regular sonnet" and "modern sonnet"?) - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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