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Falling In Love

f a l l i n g.......... in love is easy staying there is the challenge

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John Loving Iii

Date: 12/19/2011 4:59:00 PM

it take two baby.

Des Juan Richardson

Date: 9/30/2009 11:05:00 PM

Very creative format and very honest! I enjoyed your writing as usual. ~Des Juan

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/29/2009 7:11:00 AM

Original and beautiful display of creativity. Great write.

Ashley Caldwell

Date: 5/20/2009 10:34:00 PM

Very creative format

Sara Lokken

Date: 4/4/2009 11:36:00 AM

A challenge, perhaps...but also an agony. Very wise. Love, Sara:)

Adell Foster

Date: 4/1/2009 6:05:00 AM

Your words are presented as pearls of wisdom my friend, great tone, imagery and flow as wriiten in superb shape form. Thank you D-Nyce for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/30/2009 6:26:00 AM

D-nyce , great visual and great observation ...

Brian Strand

Date: 3/29/2009 11:40:00 PM

Nice viaual variation D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/29/2009 5:23:00 PM

Wow. This is so cleverly written and so true! Excellent! Love, Shar

P Sheart

Date: 3/29/2009 2:11:00 PM

Hi Deneen Awe, I just love this for isn't it the truth for so many these days. If one is lucky enough to find love they better hold on to it tooth and nail.....Perfect hun just perfect! Thanks for your most welcome comments on my latest lyric it meant a lot to me. Hope you're doing well, I'm sending good thoughts your way. Love Light Truth Patricia

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/29/2009 1:18:00 PM

Yes my friend...the work to keep it going is the trick....love the flow and the form of the piece...