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Falling For You

To you the wind whispered through the old blue shack, words too soft for meaning, as Yew limbs scratched answers against the window. In the distance a lone ewe bayed in its lost mourning, when heaven's breath blew my heart to you.
03/19/16

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Date: 4/4/2016 12:12:00 PM
Nice lines ---especially the last one. Beautiful!
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James Inman
Date: 4/5/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Susan.
Date: 3/26/2016 7:34:00 PM
Well written
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James Inman
Date: 3/26/2016 10:03:00 PM
Thanks for the kind visit Nayda.
Date: 3/22/2016 2:36:00 AM
"words too soft for meaning, as Yew limbs scratched answers against the window" ... these are some great visuals, James, and very poetically stated. And the homophones are fun, too :)
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James Inman
Date: 3/22/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks for the great comment Timothy.
Date: 3/21/2016 6:17:00 AM
what a pen you have...short and brilliant
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James Inman
Date: 3/21/2016 12:22:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, thank you Sarah.
Date: 3/21/2016 1:56:00 AM
Nice composition. Congrats James. Anisha D
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James Inman
Date: 3/21/2016 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Anisha.
Date: 3/20/2016 7:28:00 PM
I had to check out Rictameter..Enjoyed reading this one with the catchy words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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James Inman
Date: 3/20/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 3/20/2016 2:37:00 PM
wow, I think this is the most beautiful I have seen entered into this contest. You are so good, my friend!!
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James Inman
Date: 3/20/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 3/19/2016 11:01:00 PM
A profound and mesmerizing rictameter, very creative and romantic.
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James Inman
Date: 3/20/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Cynthia, for your lovely comment. I appreciate your kind visit.

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