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falling down

The winds now change from blue to gray
And gawking gulls scoop by.
The  evening blows now  comes the rain
While cries of breath now sigh.

A damp pasture shivers in the cold
Where big drops patter again.
To shower all in withered fold
From freezing trees to mother hen.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 11:25:00 AM
    the imagery in this piece is vivid, juaneco... hope to read you again..:) huggs!