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Falling Down

I am bored with love and it's passionless limbs that drape over my bed in a lethargic state of impotence while wearing the same red heart my soul picked up hitchhiking off highway serendipity Now here we are alone in togetherness trying to build dreams with two by fours and glue, but even a home won't tie us together when our hearts live alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 6:01:00 PM
Alexz, Thanks for the comment on my poem. To me, "Falling Down," was one of your Best!!! Keep up the work on the hearts that matter, even some of those they Can be healed (although sometimes it doesn't feel like it.) I'm hoping that next I'll be reading; "Getting Up." Rock with Poetry Jack K.
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:31:00 PM
I'm 16 too, about to turn 17
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Date: 11/30/2008 3:14:00 PM
this is good. and sure I'll be your friend :)
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:45:00 PM
This kind of moment is something to raise a 40 oz to..
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:41:00 PM
for calming down...
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:40:00 PM
I missed you too. :(
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:38:00 PM
Thank you..
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:36:00 PM
I love you too. Can you please stop cutting?
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:29:00 PM
Please don't do anything stupid Alexz... I mean this, me and Sam need you...
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:26:00 PM
You have me, sam and Ed..
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:17:00 PM
email him at soul_dawner@yahoo.com for proof
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:14:00 PM
Ed said "I'm sorry, i love you please stop cutting"
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:12:00 PM
Then call anyways...
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:10:00 PM
Call me now i got Ed on the phone now
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:08:00 PM
He forgot his passcode..
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Date: 11/26/2008 9:06:00 PM
He'll call me soon, are you ggoing to call me?
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Date: 11/26/2008 7:29:00 PM
"Hello Dear Young Lady!"~I had to go back to the top after reading this, to make sure that it was truly you? Why? Because it was written so beautifully; although, covering a meloncholied moment-yet, holding a lot of depth and sincere truth! That you could only escape these chains of perception dear Alexz!? I believe, that through the gift of pain and knowing, that You would become a blessing filled and wonderful writer someday!~On we go, "Love, John!":)
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