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Falling Birds

So many destructive So much destruction So many lost ones So many lost So many deaths So many dying So many sick So many sickened Again I cry And I can heed their cries But is there hope? They- They Lack The hope! The trees heard birds Falling Then they awake To see the day light ... & Hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/23/2009 3:38:00 AM
nice poem hon <3 your words run deep
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:17:00 PM
An interesting read, but, with a nice flow and messeage. Thanks for the comments on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:55:00 AM
It is dark, yet true. This is an insane world
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:33:00 AM
sounds like someone lets their house cat out at night, one house cat in a neighborhood can kill 50+ song birds a night at rest, nice message! Saidah ~~~ jmg
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