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Falling Apart

You say everything will be okay, But is that true? Can i trust you? Because life gets harder everyday, Life is always so blue... When I go to sleep, I wish to never wake- up, Because I get so deep, and have trouble getting back up... All i want is someone to lean on, Someone to trust, I just want to be done, of being judged.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/9/2011 8:30:00 PM
A very touching entry here. Just make one correction in your fourth line: Remove the apostrophe in "get's". No genitive or possessive case exists there. Everything else appears well.
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Date: 8/16/2009 4:37:00 PM
Different. Sara
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Date: 8/13/2009 12:27:00 PM
i feel the same way really! great write
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Date: 8/5/2009 5:33:00 PM
Titles great and fitting for the poem... love a truthful write that explains the emotions of a human being. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/24/2009 9:02:00 AM
ah, maturity will bring your cloak so no one can judge you....
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Date: 7/23/2009 10:15:00 PM
Many people can relate to this one. This one drips with pain. Love it. Keep writing.
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