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Its like falling off a cliff
its like diving in a pool
you don't know where you are
you don't know where to go
You spin round and round
until you're about to fall down
you hold you breath and close you'r eyes
you count to ten
and then
 you fall
you fall while the world is 
spinning so fast you cannot see
you open your eyes
but the world is gone 
you look around but no one's there
so you hold your
breath, close your eyes, and count to ten
and then..
you open them and darkness is all around 
you hear a sound 
a sound so soft,
it takes you a while to
realize its your alarm going off.

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