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Falling

Falling, like blossoms in springtime We basked in the promise of hope But some departed in the beauty of their prime With misty eyes we tried to cope Falling, like raindrops in summer our tears were suspended in time As some slipped off in peaceful slumber As softly the bells did chime Falling, like leaves in autumn Some remained only in the spirit To higher duties they were summoned They were here for just a bit Falling, like snowflakes in winter Some left us with tears untold Our hearts, like icicles, did splinter As we stood all alone in the cold

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Date: 8/20/2017 6:47:00 PM
This is very well written. I see in the comments you had some losses and I am so sorry for your loss Joseph! I am glad you could write through it! :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/20/2017 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 1/17/2015 9:56:00 PM
Filled with melancholy and very beautiful
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Joseph May
Date: 2/22/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 1/17/2015 10:43:00 AM
REreading this one and thinking how good a poem it is, and also seeing your reply to my comment below. So sorry for your loss Your heart was in this one.
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Joseph May
Date: 2/22/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 1/15/2015 10:47:00 PM
this one carries such a sad tone throughout the poem though it is quite lovely imagery. What inspired this?
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Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2015 12:07:00 PM
My aunt died recently and 2 other relatives passed on before that...
Date: 1/15/2015 2:51:00 PM
Wonderful imagery but so sad Joseph - love the power of the repeated phrase 'falling like...' A 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2015 12:12:00 PM
thank you Jan...hugs
Date: 1/15/2015 2:47:00 PM
- A very touching, sweet and lovely poem, Joseph - Although it is a bit sad, I enjoy reading - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/16/2015 12:13:00 PM
thank you Anne...hugs

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