Falling

I thought I did not love him, I had buried it deep inside, It boils to the surface, with no'where left to hide. I have tried to ignore it, Tried so hard to leave, Yet I am drawn to him, Caught in the web we weave, The gentle touch of his hand, That feeling so divine, I am falling, I cannot stop, His heart has melted mine, The veil now has lifted, His true heart revealed, And I am safe in his arms, As my heart is finally healed.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:43:00 PM

RACHEL, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 10/12/2014 9:45:00 AM

very good description of love

Greg Oakenshield

Date: 10/10/2014 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful poem.

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 10/9/2014 8:29:00 AM

A beautiful, romantic poem with a happy ending :) I enjoyed reading! Ana

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2014 4:53:00 PM

Rachel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rachel Aylott
Date: 10/8/2014 12:21:00 PM

thank you so much, i will post more poems soon and check out the site in detail at the weekend when I have more time, thanks again linda

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:07:00 AM

Rachel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Rachel Aylott
Date: 10/8/2014 12:26:00 PM

thank you very much, I will reply in more detail and check out this site thoroughly at the weekend when I have more time, I am touched by the comments I have recieved, I am new to this and I wish I had done it years ago. thank you skat

Jason Conley

Date: 10/6/2014 11:43:00 PM

I really liked this, well done Rachel!

Rachel Aylott
Date: 10/8/2014 12:28:00 PM

thank you very much jason

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/4/2014 11:58:00 PM

Beautiful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Rachel Aylott
Date: 10/8/2014 12:30:00 PM

thank you very much pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 1:30:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Rachel- I choose your first lovely written poem - I like it a lot - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rachel Aylott
Date: 10/8/2014 12:32:00 PM

thank you very much, I wish I had known about Poetry soup a long time ago I am going to spend all weekend on here I think, reading and reading, thank you x