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Falling

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Falling

Falling
with no control 
of my descent
I'm falling fast
feelings I forgot
I could have
more vulnerable
than I usually
allow myself to be
with no control
falling
and I hope
I land safe
but nevertheless
the fall 
has captured me
so I fall
with no control
falling
into the strong arms
that undo me



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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 7:00:00 PM
    Beautifully expressed; I'm glad I read this one.