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Falling

Trickling down, my soul passed. Like a raging beast, declining fast. Decreasing power, this empty core. Descending desire; lust nevermore. Draining ambition, mislaid beyond. Seeping distrust, this violent bond. Cradling youth; as yesterday’s past. Spiraling downward; falling so fast. Sketching our love; tracing our ties. Shackled in pain; festering in lies. Plunging below, coming up for air, Sinking in stench; suddenly aware. Plummeting quickly; hearts untwine. A failing romance; yours and mine. Dropping below the depth of mind, Tumbling hastily – hatred we find. Reducing strength; ambition dives. Fondling the ideal, our lives will thrive. Exhausting demands; love we’ve cast. Hitting rock bottom; lost within the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2013 6:20:00 PM
Stacy, oh, such a shame to fall so down, lovely poem, you capture the emotion so well.
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:39:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup and enjoyed reading your works.
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