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Falling

When I look into your eyes I feel a deep sense of surprise At the willingness of this tattered heart That for so long would have no part In wanting eyes and loving thoughts For fear of the hurt these feelings brought When I lay within your arms That appear to mean me no harm I often think and sometimes wonder How I could get so lucky to feel the thunder A feeling of warmth and total bliss Begins to surround me as we kiss When I'm standing along by your side The feelings are so over whelming I cannot hide Behind the mask of strong and tough No longer will the mask even be enough To overcome the bond so quickly felt As I look at you and simply melt When I sit down with my thoughts tonite I think to myself that I must begin to write And I move the pen attempting to create the perfect rhyme That could begin to describe my feelings at this time The feelings you so elegantly recalled From within the depths of these four walls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/30/2010 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful and touching. Happy Writing.
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:25:00 PM
Delightful rhyme Scarlett >> James
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:44:00 PM
lovely poem! keep it up! ------Ell
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