Falling

Fall, as the wind blows, Crisp leaves of yellow and red Harvest moon, reflecting. (For Brians Images of Fall Contest)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2009 3:22:00 PM

I can see the scene. Nicely descriptive. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/5/2009 1:44:00 AM

Love the images, nice work Karla...Raul

John Freeman

Date: 9/4/2009 10:54:00 PM

As beautiful a fall a falling as I've ever seen, vivid as tho out and about in reality. Sincerely Moses

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2009 11:37:00 PM

Beautiful images being portrayed in this lovely Haiku Karla, all the best in Brian's contest>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/30/2009 8:36:00 AM

line 3 is especially fine! a winner! jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2009 6:19:00 AM

I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Karla. I thank you for sharing your writing. Best wishes to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/26/2009 12:24:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Karla.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/25/2009 11:43:00 PM

one of the best for the contest--i love the harvest moon,excellet--charma