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FALLIBLE LOGIC Is common sense a noble choice? compared to selfish subjective emotions and desires based on the best logic we can muster making lists-- evaluating risks, determining safest profitable directions in essence, intellectually we just “play the odds” foolishly we skip the foundation—miss the guidance exalting limited logic over Eternal voices it is not the longest physical life we should seek but rather a fruitful life in spirit and deed conservative sight – fallible logic no miracles create “risky” Faith does nothing else but a miracle make Everything Jesus taught was contrary to common sense

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:46:00 PM
    Haha! It looks like the logical choice is to take the illogical path! Let's take that step of faith and see miracles happen! Nice write!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 4:07:00 PM
    hi kim oops sorry I spelled infallible I meant to spell fallible

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Hi kim how's things going for you it's been awhile since Iv'e been online, I read your poem (infallible logic) today, I really enjoyed it's blunt yet wise style, you are a great inspiration to me and I appreciate your veiw on life and attitude thank you have a great day.....B. kris

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:07:00 AM
    You crafted another profound mind-provoker. You teach me to see things differently and that last line is pure gold. In the words of that country song, "The good lord gave us mountains so we could learn how to climb" - Lonestar. Loved this!

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Kim, i like the sense, of it all. it's amusing how it's all relevant. IS Fallible a term of bible... just wondering.. xox~ Linda