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Fallen Tree

Limp, numb, abandoned Beautiful core darkened sadly Footprints now walk on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful images with nice turn of thought in the last line, Ashley
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:02:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Ashley. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:46:00 PM
I like how the last line was very haiku like!
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