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Fallen From Grace

Blanketing the dawn Another cloud falls from grace Prideful cumulus

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:05:00 PM

Brilliant Abe>>James

Walker Neese

Date: 5/21/2009 7:11:00 AM

this is example of why you win the contests. darn im jealious

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/21/2009 3:33:00 AM

that's pride for ya, always landing. and hard. wonderful haiku. love, Kristin

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 5/19/2009 3:11:00 PM

Very beautiful I can almost picture it

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:22:00 PM

Beautiful the clouds are, the last line is powerful in it self. Good job. Love E.

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/18/2009 10:53:00 AM

I Am fond of this poem.It suggest alot ,in only 3 lines ,i top you that.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/18/2009 12:20:00 AM

Brilliant work Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Daniel Neal

Date: 5/17/2009 10:11:00 PM

Loved the last line, nice work Abe. DN

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/17/2009 9:07:00 PM

There is nothing clouding your creativity! This is just BRILLIANT work Abe!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/17/2009 7:53:00 PM

Outstanding Abe! I just love this one!

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/17/2009 5:50:00 PM

Speechless! Just amazing! Awesome imagery with those clouds love them!

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/17/2009 5:32:00 PM

This is awesome. very creative. Great luck in the contest, this one looks like a winner to me. Smiles from Lolita

Date: 5/17/2009 4:14:00 PM

What a creative view in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed it. Thank you for the congrats. Have a good week! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/17/2009 4:13:00 PM

Love those clouds. Awesome imagery. Good luck Abe! Love, Shar

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/17/2009 3:31:00 PM

Beautifully written, Abe. Thank you for your comment. Poetically yours, Iolanda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2009 2:57:00 PM

Awesome haiku, Abe! "Prideful cumulus" gives a face and feelings to the cloud. Lovely!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/17/2009 2:23:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku brilliantly done! Laura :)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/17/2009 1:39:00 PM

Love the idea of a cloud falling from grace...the ending line is great...well done.

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/17/2009 1:39:00 PM

Beautifully written, fog is like a wandering mass of clouds...Raul