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Fallen From Grace

Blanketing the dawn Another cloud falls from grace Prideful cumulus

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:05:00 PM
    Brilliant Abe>>James

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 7:11:00 AM
    this is example of why you win the contests. darn im jealious

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 3:33:00 AM
    that's pride for ya, always landing. and hard. wonderful haiku. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 3:11:00 PM
    Very beautiful I can almost picture it

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 11:22:00 PM
    Beautiful the clouds are, the last line is powerful in it self. Good job. Love E.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:53:00 AM
    I Am fond of this poem.It suggest alot ,in only 3 lines ,i top you that.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:43:00 AM
    You're back and with a Masterpiece, Abe! "falls from grace" and then "Prideful"...Which one you prefer: Gold, Silver or Bronze? : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 12:20:00 AM
    Brilliant work Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 10:11:00 PM
    Loved the last line, nice work Abe. DN

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 9:07:00 PM
    There is nothing clouding your creativity! This is just BRILLIANT work Abe!

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 7:53:00 PM
    Outstanding Abe! I just love this one!

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 5:50:00 PM
    Speechless! Just amazing! Awesome imagery with those clouds love them!

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 5:32:00 PM
    This is awesome. very creative. Great luck in the contest, this one looks like a winner to me. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 4:13:00 PM
    Love those clouds. Awesome imagery. Good luck Abe! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 3:31:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Abe. Thank you for your comment. Poetically yours, Iolanda

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 2:57:00 PM
    Awesome haiku, Abe! "Prideful cumulus" gives a face and feelings to the cloud. Lovely!

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 2:23:00 PM
    Wonderful Haiku brilliantly done! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:39:00 PM
    Love the idea of a cloud falling from grace...the ending line is great...well done.

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 1:39:00 PM
    Beautifully written, fog is like a wandering mass of clouds...Raul