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We walk together every day reminiscing on the daily family occurrence till one day I tripped and fell. I dwell discouraged, never to have my best friend again By: Eve Roper 11/30/2015

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/5/2015 8:54:00 PM

i really felt this one as i have personal experience of it - it stings! - congrats on your deserved win

Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2015 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte, it does hurt espically if you walked together everyday.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2015 3:15:00 PM

An honest expression of hurt feelings, but I hope that things got better in time (?). Congrats on this fine win, Eve! Regards // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2015 8:39:00 PM

Friendship last forever if you got love in your heart, but the pain doesn't stop it just easies. Ironic after I move across the country she had the same type of surgery for a different illness where it left me with bell's palsy it left her with still a lot of pain.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/4/2015 9:38:00 PM

Wonderful verse n win Eve.. big congrats!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, so much for your constant support.

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2015 8:11:00 PM

Hi Eve, a very nice win. SKAT

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thank you, Skat, always here for me.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/4/2015 7:25:00 PM

awww, Eve...sorry your sister treated you that way... but congrats on this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2015 7:08:00 PM

wow, that is really inconsiderate of her. Great job in the contest.

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/4/2015 6:35:00 PM

Nothing like a gauntlet to show you just who your friends really are, or what they really are. Glad you turned the page. Congrats.

Lu Loo

Date: 12/4/2015 4:40:00 PM

Here I am! back to congratulate you on your well deserved win! I knew you would win! -lu *smiles*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2015 4:39:00 PM

i was there feeling the pain; well done, eve... sweet, fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2015 4:26:00 PM

I'm 100% positive I commented on this and another entry in the contest Eve - so sad when friend let us down and trust is gone:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 12/2/2015 2:14:00 PM

Eve, this is just like you said about my poem the other day, I "turned the page" on my journey through life. Lovely poem here...God bless :)-lu *smiles*

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2015 5:46:00 AM

Enjoyed. Sk

David Meade

Date: 11/30/2015 10:30:00 PM

In hardships we do find out who are our true friends!!