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Fallen Foliage

Deep in Nature's woods Battle scars of weathered life Silently descend

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2011 7:36:00 PM

Descriptive winning work..Congrats..Sara

Paul Beadnall

Date: 10/10/2011 3:12:00 PM

Congrats Carolyn with blessings from Paul.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 2:55:00 PM

Nice Haiku here.Seems to be a photo based.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2010 12:02:00 AM

Hey, congratulations,I think I somehow missed this one. Good job, Carolyn. LUv, andrea

James Fraser

Date: 4/24/2010 5:18:00 PM

Many congratulations on your first place in Raul's contest Carolyn. Terrific Haiku >> James

Daver Austin

Date: 4/24/2010 10:12:00 AM

If no one is there to witness, do battle scars occur? Do they "silenty" descend? Hey! This is a mind boggler. You be Spooky. Love, Daver

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on another win, Carolyn!! hugs, Jimmy

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:25:00 AM

I searched and found this contest come and gone while I was gone and lo and behold you did indeed win with your lovely descriptive words. Joyce

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/24/2010 9:21:00 AM

I'm just home from several days away. Haven't found this contest but this is a winner I am sure. Thanks for your comments on Sounds of Summer. Love, Joyce

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/24/2010 8:54:00 AM

Oh I like this congrats on well penned with beautiful imagery thos sad keep up the great work my friend and thanks a million for your kind comments also keep up the wonderful work

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/23/2010 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations again my friend a beautiful and well written Haiku for sure,,Great job,,,Blessings..Cecil

John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2010 5:51:00 PM

Awesome poem Carolyn for your first place win. Congratulations my friend, Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2010 12:37:00 PM

Congrad's on your 1# win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2010 7:42:00 AM

A lovely win from a lovely lady!! Beautiful haiku Carolyn....congratulations on your 1st place win!! Well deserving this honor!! Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Kim M

Date: 4/23/2010 6:17:00 AM

My Queen, I'm speechless as I curtsy. Your victorious kingdom is safe, while your tired army rests. ...I mean, Congratulations, Carolyn! (applauding smiles with a wink)