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Fallen Antler

Old Fallen Antler
cries deep in the snow.
Lost in the dead undergrowth.

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:45:00 AM
    I really like this one. It invokes such sadness.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 10:32:00 AM
    Welcome to poetrysoup... Hope to be reading more of your work soon.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:46:00 AM
    welcome to poetry soup. enjoyed your haiku, john

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    Date: 12/31/2012 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you all for the kind reviews and welcomes. I never see much Native American Haiku done and felt that it would be rather unique yet fitting to try one.