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Fallen Angel's Lament

Black shades cutting ice breaks ground deeply ebony chills darkness creeps closely consumed Abandoned waste easily exhausted lands with it's own need The fire inside laced sulphur burning ash inferno remains Venom underneath clay mixed To extinguish the light Blank rage fills an empty void buried inside hate scorned sadness mixed with madness condemns Demons dance upon the flame hissing spits As fossils from the past ghosts haunting negative abuse hides With tortured truth lies underneath bankrupt happiness Forever self inflicting harm Empty existence fouling grace cold silk pearls shame crashing down the neck From the shivering timbers falling vacant love exist's hallowed Broken mirror reflections beyond repair or answers one blur crushing every lost soul pulling the trigger Without good reason or remorse suicidal death Numb nothing crashes fate beneath the soil held sponge captive Trying to see a future from within the shawl of suffering life's fate hounds deals their cards from the crook in their heart Countless empty hours spent Locked inside chains battle scared breaking free on the last breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/1/2016 11:33:00 AM
- A deep and sad poem Liam - The poem itself is of high quality, and really well written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 9:06:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very deep dark and very sad, heartfelt poem that you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just amazing!A very deeply sad fallen angel lament indeed Liam, so sad,but very beautifully written.Excellent piece!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Just dazzling!Outstanding!Just awesome!A true glowing golden gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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