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Fallen Angels

Angels, descending from above, Echoes of mercy, whispers of love Angels, weavers of dreams, Harbingers of nightmares, they bring screams When fallen they become, lost is this world For the heavens become hells, fiery and all curled! Angels, fallen they may be, Yet, they shall not remain so for eternity The ONE above is full of pity For his children lost in absurdity, Feeling like crazy beings in a reality Where Time is Fool's stupidity! Angels, descending from above, shall try with all their might To bring harmony to the land of the dove, where lost is the light!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2012 10:57:00 AM
Thank you for ur warm thoughts Carol :)
Date: 2/20/2012 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Anoucheka!!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2012 10:57:00 AM
/thank you so much Anne Lise!
Date: 2/19/2012 11:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is written very well.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:50:00 PM
Thank you loads Robert......I love writing......so appreciation is for me...just Awesome!!!
Date: 2/19/2012 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the fallen angel contest. A unique poem with its own point of view!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:42:00 PM
Thakns for appreciating Andrea!
Date: 2/19/2012 3:12:00 PM
congratulations!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Christopher!
Date: 2/19/2012 11:55:00 AM
Anoucheka, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem.Enjoyed the read.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Kash!
Date: 2/19/2012 11:23:00 AM
Anoucheka, Wonderful job and a very nice work. Congrats for placing on Tracie's winners list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Samual
Date: 2/19/2012 7:35:00 AM
Wow, this is massively powerful poem. I enjoyed this! I love how you opened, how you told the stories and how you ended this..perfection on words. Congrats on the win :)
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:44:00 PM
Thanks so much for appreciation Dinda...Thanks loads! :)
Date: 2/19/2012 7:22:00 AM
congrats on a wonderful win for this magnificent write on fallen Angels luv..
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda !
Date: 2/19/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations a smashing write a deserving win xx
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:34:00 PM
very nice , I enjoyed reading your work
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/19/2012 11:42:00 PM
Thakns loads Stephan!
Date: 2/18/2012 8:07:00 AM
An interesting and creditrable attempt.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/18/2012 8:34:00 AM
Thanks..........!!!

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