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Fallen Angel

Self banished from castle of dreams Boiling poisonous emotions of cess pool Dominate evil feelings as rapid streams Living the fantasies from being a fool An arrow crossed the once loving soul Robbing forever the sacred innocence Discovering the lies that smelt foul Making a world full of indiferrence Black attire is the color that describes The inner tones that paint vividly Aftermath of deceptions that subscribes In the mind that wanders fervidly For Fallen Angel Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo Second Place August 5, 2017

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Date: 8/25/2017 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful write, Nayda, and exquisite phrasing - congrats on your win! :-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/25/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Greg.
Date: 8/25/2017 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, Nayda on the win.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 8/25/2017 6:36:00 AM
sweet Nayda, love the imagery and so very beautifully expressed! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/10/2017 4:30:00 PM
Hi Nayda: I was deeply blown away by your intense wordage. I wish you well in the contest!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/10/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Ralph.
Date: 8/8/2017 8:56:00 PM
Deep write with a lot of imagery depicting the photo , Nayda, well done and good luck in the contest.. ~*
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2017 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 8/8/2017 10:56:00 AM
Great imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Janis.
Date: 8/5/2017 9:16:00 PM
Hi Nayda, beautifully done. Good luck in the contest!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/5/2017 11:23:00 PM
Thank you Susan.

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