Home » Poems » Erin S » Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel

Paradise no longer, forever expelled Between worlds in limbo shamefully held A span once to carry close to the sky Burn as I fell, mangled and dry Impossible to compare the beauties I have seen My Lord, please let me redeem!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

David Scott

Date: 11/1/2012 4:30:00 PM

LOVELY PEACE LIKE THE PATTERN XX DAVIDSCOTT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2012 7:38:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Erin. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

Larisa Rzhepishevska

Date: 10/25/2012 11:45:00 PM

Beautiful poem! Loved it so much. With warmest wishes, Larisa

Carl Fraser

Date: 10/25/2012 10:59:00 PM

You are always forgiven Erin, and God sees it as gone. We are the ones who cant let it go. Forgive yourself as well. Carl,