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For many who tried on a pedestal to live Acting as if this was they were meant to be Lording it over those who were to help Life has a way to remind us its karma Ensure your pedestal is based on respect Never expect respect if it is not earned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/9/2015 2:42:00 AM
This is an inspiring poem, a pleasure to read. Incorporation of some rhyme would make it still richer
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John Doherty
Date: 10/9/2015 2:48:00 AM
I am uncertain whether rhyming would enhance it, as it may distract from the meaning, as I consider myself a swordsmith, I must write it as I am given it. Thank you for your comments

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