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Fall Whether

Fall Whether broken— there our veins are joint; by leaves that saturate the ground with new beauty that I walk through cracking myself on gems, but soft— Whether the weather breaks.

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Date: 9/8/2023 11:13:00 AM
Love your play on words, Paige. You have expressed such pensive beauty of the passing season. Nicely done. I like the poetic form you chose. It gives emphasis to the expression found in each line articulating your poem's theme. Blessings!
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