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Fall Song - A Collab with Linda Alice Fowler

Fall flourishes with flighty flair, a lilting song upon the air. Symphony of fading cinder all in spirit, rhythm, and timbre. In Her heart a mild melody flirting with a sweet revelry. She has not sung this song before, an unearthly, uplifting score. Morendo a niente, fades out, catching Her breath in subtle shout. Crescendo of color escapes in multidimensional shapes. Catching currents, Her breath has blown, paves the path with scattered seeds sown. Her name is carved on every tree She has conceived her canopy. Dulcet, the voice of Autumn sways, Presto agitato, She plays, Leaves flutter in a rustling dance, taking part in russet romance. What sweet music tingles the trees! Baring bold birches, blows the breeze, Arias aired in harmony with woods akin bleeding honey. Enjoy Fall's vibrant banjo beats, as she raps with hued leafy sheets, whispering soft kisses and dreams, Refrains released in umber streams. Foliage tanned and tinted brown tango with harvest's golden gown, Autumnal chorus slow tingles, Join in with Her joyful jingles.

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Date: 4/6/2024 9:04:00 AM
What a lovely collaboration by you two.. Nicely done..
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Date: 4/5/2024 5:57:00 PM
Dear Joanna, your collaborative poem with Linda Alice Fowler is an enchanting ode to the beauty and magic of autumn. The imagery you both created together creates a wonderful picture of the season's splendor, from the rustling dance of leaves to the harmonious melody of nature's symphony. I loved how the lyrical flow of your words captures the essence of fall's vibrant energy and gentle whispers, inviting readers to immerse themselves in its enchanting embrace. Your collaboration is a testament to the power of creativity and partnership, resulting in a breathtaking piece that resonates with warmth and joy. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/5/2024 5:24:00 PM
a wonderful collaboration between you two. This poem was a delight to read with its outstanding imagery and smooth-flowing rhyme scheme. Loved this alliterative line: Baring bold birches, blows the breeze I also liked these words: In Her heart, a tenuous tune flirting with a bold maroon moon. Indeed the moon is sometimes maroon! Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/5/2024 12:06:00 PM
Nicely done Jo. always a pleasure collaborating with you! hugs :)
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