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Fall Down Together Love

Ruby all boils down to you in every dream hot one vision cannot shake free Visiting center nerve glows of everlasting beauty flowering blossoms Singing jewel gem voice of a sweet angel kiss eyes faraway mystery Rose your soft petals touch the deepest chambers swept away ocean tides wave Pearl of the deep sea crowning queen between two shells holding such rare color love embracing ring one daisy

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Gary Bateman

Date: 2/4/2015 6:32:00 PM

Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns have told me that this one's WINNER and is quite enchanting as a Choka. Brilliant Job!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2015 11:32:00 AM

- We say that Love knows no boundaries and that Love conquers all .... - Beautiful poem, Liam ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/4/2015 6:36:00 AM

Excellent romantic poem my dear friend, Liam. So much enjoyed the read. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/3/2015 11:02:00 PM

Excellent.Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Paul Callus

Date: 2/3/2015 12:07:00 PM

So very romantic, Liam. Flowers and precious stones are beautiful and alluring, but are nothing compared to true love! All the best. // paul

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/3/2015 7:44:00 AM

Magical images in this gem that speaks so wonderfully of love.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2015 2:12:00 AM

Outstanding imagery and a beautiful poem you have penned Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/7/2015 1:01:00 PM

thank you connie for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/2/2015 8:43:00 PM

Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just awesome! A gigantic 7 +++ from me! A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it! Truly mighty golden pen! So sweet and beautiful! To me you're the best! May all your hopes and dreams come true. Always believe in you! God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always!Have a very lovely evening :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^ "

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/7/2015 12:59:00 PM

dorian dear pal thank you for your kindness really beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you