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Warm colors of fall contrast in their irony as cooler days come. Let autumn’s bright golden hues linger on landscapes longer. *Tanka written June 15, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/29/2014 9:06:00 PM
My friend, big congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 6/29/2014 4:52:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations for this wonderful win. hugs jan xxx
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:47:00 PM
a well-deserved win for its soft autumn images and warm metaphors, carolyn.. sweet congrats and huggs
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Date: 6/29/2014 12:57:00 PM
I too wish fall lingered longer....very lovely.....congratulations
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:14:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, I extend a huge congratulations to you for your great win which you so richly deserve, my friend! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/29/2014 8:46:00 AM
congrats on a great win, Carolyn.. I do wish Fall would linger longer. It is my favorite time of year. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:47:00 AM
Carolyn, congrats for a fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful tanka, Carolyn. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/29/2014 5:07:00 AM
Lovely tanka, Carolyn; touched by the lingering warm hues. Congrats on a merited win. [I would delete '.' after the pivot:)] Take care..........paul
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:43:00 AM
You are making me long for the coolness of fall already with this lovely tanka Carolyn. Big Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:38:00 PM
Carolyn, this was a sweet one for fall. The last two lines really got me. Love that word "linger" and I love the fall's beauty. congrats in my contest.
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Date: 6/16/2014 11:21:00 AM
Oh I too love the autumn colours and this poem brings them all to life. Hugs Jan xxx
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