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Fall Trees wounded by color's brilliant army-- sadly I view nature bleed ichor, orange and red. Beneath my feet, earth shivers and cries out, do not succumb, loved Summer; she sighs one last sweet breath. © June 15, 2014, Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 6/29/2014 6:41:00 PM
beautiful imagery plus great waves of feelings you arouse..!! CONGRATULATIONS FAYE... !
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:52:00 PM
hauntingly beautiful, fay.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 6/29/2014 1:05:00 PM
This really comes to life! Congratulations on a fine win...
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:18:00 AM
Hi Faye, this is such a beautifully descriptive write! Huge congratulations to you on your great win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:03:00 AM
congrats on a great win, Faye. Beuitiful images of Fall. Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:58:00 AM
Lovely kimos of fall Faye. Congrats for the fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:10:00 AM
Hi Faye,,,this is so lovely and yet so sad! Pity for that extra 'and' in 1st Kimo; would even have sounded better without it!:) Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:09:00 AM
Wow!!! so creative...a personified kimo. Many congrats on your win, Faye. Elaine
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:51:00 PM
Oh, Faye, this is yours? this would have been in top three except that you had one too many syllables in line three. It is a really easy fix. Just remove the "an" I don't think the word ichor even requires an article. The second one you wrote was absolutely stunning and it could have stood alone as a top winner. congratulations.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/29/2014 9:50:00 PM
I fixed it...can't believe I didn't catch that. Thanks, Andrea, for the placement.
Date: 6/17/2014 1:58:00 PM
Great Imagery! Love the poem! Good Job Ma'am!
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