Fake

The lies you told me, The things you said, The things I believed you say, The things we did, All the lies you told me, We end up here at this point in time.

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Katy C

Date: 3/2/2010 4:40:00 PM

it's very interesting... much shorter than my own, but i can't judge based on size. and anyway, those 6 short lines say everything; no need to say more! good work :)

Angela Alldredge

Date: 2/25/2010 5:23:00 PM

Sounds as if someone really broke your heart also. There is someone that will love you the way you deserve out their, I promise. Enjoyed and liked reading your work.

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/24/2010 10:43:00 AM

i really hate a liar. this poem was good and shows where all those lies will take you. Jo

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 6:57:00 PM

same as Lynette :) ------Ell

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/20/2010 6:54:00 PM

And fake they are. -Always&Forever Lynette