Fake

They're not your friend this message I'll send you're sure to feel the prick uh oh a clique their standards are too high and even if you comply you won't meet up to them even though you're a gem they won't recognize you as one that's not a lot of fun for the outsider you're eyes will be wider you'll receive attention at first if your talent doesn't burst you must be ideal to what they feel that you should be they're never free a stickler to their belief together they will brief it's as if you're back in school resembling a fool what a bunch of snobs they gather in mobs don't let your heart to ache for they're nothing but a fake

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2020 5:10:00 PM

You have nailed those #$%&*%$# cliques to the wall. Way to give them exactly what they deserve. A pox on them all, Angela. Smiles, Gershon

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/22/2020 7:12:00 PM

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/16/2020 7:03:00 PM

Dear Angie, as always, your rhymes are brilliant and so is the fierce incising ink spilled from your rapier pen. You wield your sharp-edged quill with artistry and finesse, dear poetess. You are awesome and so is your beautiful emotional poetry. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. I always appreciate your visit and kind words. Have a wonderful week :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2020 5:13:00 AM

Be yourself--and you will always see things through. Well said about the phony people.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. I am who I am. Some people like that and some don't. Hope you have a good night :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/16/2020 3:03:00 AM

Who wants fake?! We can well do without them! I won't sell my heart and soul just to be 'accepted'! Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 4:55:00 PM

Yes, absolutely. Thank you, Paul :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/16/2020 1:06:00 AM

There are many Pharisees around. I tend to ignore them. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I try to ignore them when I can. Hope you have a good night :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/15/2020 9:11:00 PM

Hello Angela … there’s plenty of these fakes around who tend to get a kick out of belittling. I wonder what they think when alone - thanks again Angela

Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/16/2020 4:53:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay. Hope you have a great week :)