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Faithful In Love

Bare-branched the woodland trees, edging the lake Young Pen glided alone without a mate Graceful her strokes, nary a wave or wake I watched and wondered, what would be her fate He circled her before landing nearby Handsome Cob, but friend or foe would he be She turned away from him, wary and shy No trumpet called. No intent decreed. In circles they swam until their wings brushed Eyes lifted, in that moment they both knew Tenderly, with necks entwined, her cheeks flushed She followed him to a stand of bamboo Intimate calls were whisperings each night 'til away they flew, together in flight Came the time of twilight and winds shifted Upon lake waters brewed cause for worry When in sorrow it had seemed they'd drifted Woe to hearts if it ended their story Spring was on nigh, but grey clouds filled the sky Pen feared her Cob would abandon their bed She cried thinking he would tell her, 'goodbye' Ripples on the lake, hope hung by a thread Together or apart, their reflection. She pleaded with him, "I want nothing more than to give you my love and affection." He drew her near, "It's you that I adore." Tale of Pen and Cob continues today Faithful in love, they're nesting on the quay April~3~23~kj

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Date: 4/6/2023 7:27:00 AM
Your talent never fails to amaze me Jenna. Fascinating and fabulous painting and poem! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/6/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you for such gracious thoughts, Linda.
Date: 4/5/2023 9:38:00 PM
After reading your poem my almost daily conversations with the local swans will be deepened by your insight. ( interestingly, in Australia our swans are black in colour ). A truly delightful read Jenna. Enjoyed.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/5/2023 9:46:00 PM
Hi Paul. What a lovely thing to do, talking to the swans. I have none near, so give my greetings to yours. Thank you for enjoying my swan love story.
Date: 4/5/2023 8:56:00 AM
What can l say that l haven't said before…lovely and talented!! Beautiful elegant creatures….Debx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/5/2023 8:59:00 AM
Every time you say them you make me smile. Thank you, Deb.
Date: 4/4/2023 10:01:00 AM
What better symbol for eternal love than swans. You're painting evokes intimacy so many seek, so few find. Poetically married, words and pictures. Oftentimes you place us near awe, Belle. ~;)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 11:14:00 AM
oh, Arlo, I'm grateful for friends like you and appreciate your kind words, but I struggle like everyone else in life, trying to stay positive. Swans are the perfect symbol of loyalty in love. Thank you.
Date: 4/4/2023 8:14:00 AM
Who knew you were a painter? I like the top half the best and of course the fairy tale ending. Nicely penned, Jenna. (FYI) did you know that swans mate for life. only 3% end in "divorce" for infertility and upon death they remate.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 9:23:00 AM
lol Danny. My palette sometimes sits for months. Splattered with dried paint. The ink in my pen never seems to run dry. Thank you for commenting. Know that you and Buddy are on my mind.
Date: 4/4/2023 5:18:00 AM
The mating game is indeed complex Jenna, these guys hook up for life, rather than a one nighter, and woe betide any pretender that thinks he might have a chance, of course you know all this, but express it in a much more romantic way than I ever could, your gift to poetry, and the arts, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 9:21:00 AM
Loyalty in swans that no human could dare comprehend with our imperfections. Which species then, deserves to have immortality? God's plan will prevail, but sometimes I'd wish to have a love like that of this mated pair. Thank you for thinking of my art and poetry as a gift. The one you give me in your comments is invaluable.
Date: 4/4/2023 2:01:00 AM
Wow! You amaze me with your poetry, Jenna, and that painting is class!! I never knew you painted...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 2:41:00 AM
Good morning Jo and thank you for liking the poem and painting. I started painting when challenged to try. I can't draw, but paint is more forgiving than a pencil. Hugs for your comments.
Date: 4/3/2023 2:10:00 PM
Even the graceful swans find romance, your paintings are brilliant Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/3/2023 2:36:00 PM
I've always loved watching graceful swans. They are so regal. I'm happy you like this painting, Tom... thank you.
Date: 4/3/2023 1:08:00 PM
Fine write Jenna. The interaction. Of lovers. And mates. You are Rolling. Lovely painting. Have a great Day.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/3/2023 2:35:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit, R.J.
Date: 4/3/2023 11:15:00 AM
Enjoyed very much! Thanks for posting!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/3/2023 2:34:00 PM
Hi Joyce and thank YOU for reading and your comment.

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