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Doubt wraps me in a fabric of uncoated leaves on this near treacherous waning eve as orchids rest beneath viscous cloudbursts: I feel distanced from the elements of earth while stars blink dimly these hands cannot reach... O forbearance come for me ; be the thread binding me until wind- washed air cuddles my arms through mist of an incandescent dew, if only to taste that resurrected light in glum hours-- cycle after cycle-- and await my son's homecoming from battle's filth; when this unbearable darkness gives way to pulses of one victorious trail … Then morning, shimmer against my feeble breath allowing a godly intervention of dawn, miraculous. ------------------------- 9/13/2019 ------------- Inspiration from John 12: 36 ' Believe in the light while you have the light, so that you may become children of the light.'

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Date: 12/21/2019 10:10:00 AM
Great poem with an outstanding message. Amazing how the Bible inspires poets to write poems.
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Date: 10/10/2019 3:21:00 AM
Such wonderful poetic flair you have Nette. Another Great read. Blessings my friend. CARL
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Date: 10/8/2019 6:25:00 PM
poetic. motherly. thought provoking. Well written.
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Date: 10/8/2019 2:17:00 AM
Your title sure does nette, and allows the blind to see. This poem of yours as always is of excellent reading, and so meaningful.
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Date: 10/3/2019 3:47:00 PM
Fortitude and the outcome of holding onto faith. Powerful
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:14:00 PM
Hi Nette… just wondered why you didn't enter this in the contest? I always love what you write. God bless you and I hope you're ok
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:53:00 PM
Hi nette… Just read this again and it's beautiful beyond words - So sad that your son is away like this and, not being a mother myself, I can't possibly imagine your feelings, expressed so beautifully here. God bless you
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Date: 9/29/2019 10:10:00 PM
What a joy to read your words again.. never have you disappointed my senses. I feel the anguish of worry and the sense of hope in this. Beautifully done as always. It's been a long, long while but I am trying to write again. Hugs, Deb
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:57:00 AM
Hi Nette, A mothers worst fear and unbearable pain must be when her son goes to war, but this mother's faith is steadfast, she knows that he will return - majestic write, so well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
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Date: 9/26/2019 9:27:00 PM
Lost in the wonder of your majestic words.. wow, Nette!
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Date: 9/23/2019 6:06:00 AM
Reading this reminds me of the works of the golden masters, John Donne, Keats, Wordsworth, Byron, Browning, Rossetti, Shelly, etc, etc.. Good luck in the contest. A fav-- a true gem...
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Date: 9/22/2019 7:45:00 PM
Hi nette: Your poem moves like a melody of bliss.
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Date: 9/22/2019 9:06:00 AM
Oh this one reaches deep. So well expressed. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/18/2019 2:10:00 PM
- A beautiful Psalm, Nette :) - Especially the last verse :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2019 12:32:00 PM
A beautifully written piece Nette. You describe fully the fear we feel when separated from our loved ones and the joyful relief we feel at their return, the thankfulness we feel when the trials are over and we emerge victorious. I love this. Excellent. A winner in my book. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:15:00 PM
Absolutely love this Nette. A 7 Blessings Carl
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Date: 9/15/2019 3:08:00 PM
wow, you did a marvelous psalm, Nette. I sure wish I could think how to do this contest. you nailed it.
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Date: 9/15/2019 9:43:00 AM
Some lovely lines here, especially the opening.. I can see you were inspired here...
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