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Faith In Love

They are always suffering They don't deserve this And neither do I It kills me inside That I can't help them I need guidance Show yourself to me You're supposed to guide me So why don't I hear you? You claim to know so many things that I don't And yet you give me no indication Ever That you exist That you can help Don't tell me I suffer by choice Just tell me where to look And what to do For the solution to come And the problem disappear Forever and Ever They can't continue on much longer I'm all they have If I won't fix this no one will I need to make a difference I need to have faith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 3:08:00 PM
Give love time to grow, quite the mind, Godly Love, Moses!
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:06:00 PM
Faith in your own abilities! Light & Love Hero
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:58:00 AM
very strong and powerful write. loved it the whole way through- love and peace:james
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:16:00 AM
Great write! Great message. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:20:00 AM
well done ... this faith is surelyan answer to my quest in life! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/5/2009 9:53:00 PM
I guess they're supposed to be transferable. I use the most generic terms I can find so the reader ends up assigning a 'they' for themselves.
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Date: 4/5/2009 8:54:00 PM
Yoni, your plea for guidance is a profound write. So many times I have asked for "direction," and wondered why I could not figure out what God wanted me to do. This poem is like that voice that speaks inside of me seeking answers. You capture the confusion and helpless feeling very well. Love, Carolyn
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