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Fairytales and Love

************************************************ Clouds burst their rainbows amid the night.... Cascading showers in loves colourful lights Glitter became the stars which filled the sky Inside my heart and afore my eyes ~ Into my soul did they come to rest Atop palettes of dreams; their dreams bequest.... What you knew and what I thought Who I am and whom your not As time it tears this page so fair Confetti streams, tis where I'll find you there.... ************************************************ ...."Fairytales and Love" *

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Jay Loveless

Date: 4/4/2012 6:31:00 AM

This is so beautiful (: I've added it to my favorites ~Jessica

Date: 4/7/2012 8:36:00 AM

...Look At You Jessie, What Are You Licking Girl ˜ Hahaha :)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 3/30/2012 12:08:00 AM

How do you get this 2000+comments John? Do you ever sleep? Just wondering! I have not been writing lately, but I will again once I get my momentum! Thanks for sharing your love and fairytales (vice versa) Dalila

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/29/2012 8:18:00 AM

Like this very much.

Briana Lynn Minard-Adler

Date: 3/28/2012 8:42:00 AM

That was very beautiful and thank you for that wonderful message on My "I Hate Bullies" poem.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/27/2012 9:46:00 AM

Hi John, Love the astral dreams you weave and bring them to a personal level. Your words always give me a reason to dream! Luv, Lizzie :)

Janice Herzog

Date: 3/25/2012 11:27:00 AM

Dear John: This is very beautifully written, and loving too. Love, Janice

John Beam

Date: 3/19/2012 7:48:00 PM

to let you know, this is very well written John. The truth shall set you free.

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/16/2012 11:37:00 AM

I find the sarcasm real in this...but it works well. Fairytales...not all...but yes often. God Bless !!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/27/2012 3:11:00 PM

1700 comments wow.

Cindy Cayton
Date: 10/29/2012 3:04:00 PM

Wow John, I'm not one to judge, I leave it to the judge, thats why they call them JUDGE, ya know I hope you are all doing well here at the soup in my absence. Take care and God bless you both, Cindy

Date: 3/16/2012 7:39:00 AM

... Tis Suppose To Read ¥ "While The Band Begins To Play, And Johnny Came Marching Home; Sucking Upon Her Flesh; The State Of The Unions Address."

Date: 3/16/2012 7:16:00 AM

‡ ... "Watching The Drool Trickling Down My Chin; Off To The Races Within, Another Day Of Sin * Sitting With Sigmund Freud While Sharing A Rail Of Coke; A Psycho Scientific Breakthrough As, He Begins To Choke * And Everyone Is Here; Little Miss Dumpling In Her Pocka Dot Shoes Singing In Soprano's, LSD Blues * Give Him His Friggin Cigarettes And Colonel Mustard Begins Swallowing A Bag Of Cats Eyes * Smashing The Glass To Let In Some Fresh Air; Spoon Feeding Baby Jelly Reds Amid Their High Chair * Humming The Notes Of If Your Going To San Francisco Then Don't Forget To Wear, Crystal Meth In Your Hair * While The Band Begins To Play, And Johnny Came Marching Home; The State Of Unions Address." ... ‡

Daver Austin

Date: 2/15/2012 10:51:00 AM

I find a certain amount of humor in this one, John, as well as pathos or bitterness. Anywho, you be de man. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Diane Christian

Date: 2/7/2012 5:34:00 AM

thanks Joh, for being you, Big HUGS to you, and thank you for all your words of kindness, you a spcial friend. God bless you from diane,

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/3/2012 7:14:00 AM

Magical as ever..a great escape to fairyland..Its so nice to be back reading your missed wonderful poetry dear John,Charma.

Date: 2/28/2012 7:44:00 AM

‡ ... "Distorted this image amid the mirror; truths masquerade ¥ Standing afore its reflection these vague in blurried eyes ¥ Realisms cup has dried; no desire to return unto what was ¥ But a charade within dolefuls midnight mass; warped, the glass." ... ‡

Lisa Cooper

Date: 2/1/2012 8:54:00 PM

lovely write I like this alot

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/1/2012 5:39:00 PM

did I offend you? If so I appologize...did not intend to.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/31/2012 7:59:00 PM

hie thee hither and let my spirit tickle thou ear....shakespeare's Macbeth

Date: 2/1/2012 8:36:00 AM

Smile ˜ Or, Is It Sweeet CandleLight Romance That Your Beauty Requires?? ˜

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/31/2012 7:58:00 PM

John, you need to write me a new poem it has been a while since you posted.....the buttercups are blossoming here and the crocus. most of the forsythia has bloomed though they did not make a great show this time. one of my favs the tulip trees are blooming full. makes me feel I can survive the cold days left till spring.

Date: 2/1/2012 8:32:00 AM

Smile ˜ How Would Your Sweeet Beauty Like It * Hot-N-Spicy?? ˜

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 1/31/2012 2:03:00 PM

Beautiful!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/29/2012 4:12:00 PM

your beautiful words shine radiant too Mr R, and what a beautiful poem this is, colourful, prismatic rainbow hues :-)

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/29/2012 1:43:00 PM

Enjoyed your wonderful work John, best wishes, and don't worry about the mouse cos he got the house. Elizabeth

Erich Goller

Date: 1/29/2012 1:42:00 PM

lovely and colorful Fairytales of love..I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Ercih

The Situation

Date: 1/28/2012 10:16:00 AM

Wow! over a thousand views. i never thought it possible. must be a record. thanks for the surprizing comment.

Cindy Lu
Date: 2/22/2012 11:40:00 AM

you don't really crack me up, I thought of you much, not so much lately as before, I have grown much here, I cannot take your jokes, and you'll always think of me as "looney tooney" so very upset and teary I leave, but I hold no ill will, I keep praying, then handed it to God Almighty because I cannot endure anything more, so long, Cindy Lu! '

Cindy Lu
Date: 2/13/2012 7:16:00 AM

it was unfair to attack. I will not do that anymore. I have been blessed with understanding the truths. I was angry because of all that has been written and said of me, so I wanted people to laugh at you also, very childish, I am sorry. I am blessed with the mercy and grace of the Lord to continue my walk. it doesn't matter what you and your gang say, scorn or laugh, I will not complain. It is expected in my calling. God bless you all, peace be in your hearts, so that you all may look to the light instead of humor. It didn't work well for me, and God I am sure doesn't like the pain it causes others. In His servie, Cindy

Cindy Lu
Date: 2/13/2012 7:11:00 AM

please forgive.

Cindy Lu
Date: 2/6/2012 7:41:00 AM

well I was just having fun stage door Johnny, or flyyyy, johnyy angel, believe me no, you aint no angels, all my friends read from hs about 10 and we were at an alterior plane at the moment, we had a bit of a party of me just bein myself making fun of you this time!!!!!!hahahahaha

Date: 2/2/2012 3:12:00 PM

Smile ˜ You Crack Me Lulu * Still As Looney As The Tooney Time We Met!:) ˜

Lucinda Cayton
Date: 2/1/2012 1:45:00 PM

she is worthy of the love, flyyyy johnny fly, take of the mask Grace right now!!!! you are my king, Pat. Pat? yes Pat. a lil more than that .....tatatatatatapat. dang a bottle of pink klembnosis for what? a drop or two strained. now patricia, pat. do not cry, its evil Lucinda, she is related to Dr. evil, she is a giant in kids world. so f off both of you entwine your self to a bail of hay, and a horse, any horse will eat between ya, well, they are pretty smart? a stallion? my gosh, his online stamina a stallion, I wrote stallion in a mist, uhuh.

Lucinda Cayton
Date: 2/1/2012 1:39:00 PM

actually no. his tribute to pressurized gas was.

Larissa Summitt

Date: 1/28/2012 10:03:00 AM

Jon your poems are out of this world, so amazing and touching, there like a wave of the ocean, each wave is differnt and has its own texture, keep doing ur work, it is very good

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/28/2012 9:16:00 AM

Sweet love poem. You've written it elegantly :) thanks for your vibrating comment, John. Great weekend.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/28/2012 8:12:00 AM

Wonderfully with honey like words adorned a sweet picture of Fairytales and Love, Loved much. Loved, bl

Diane Christian

Date: 1/22/2012 2:56:00 PM

hi John i was just thinking of you. I have a friend that lives far away butt hey in my thoughts and heart every single day nice comments they send and the memories will linger on, I havea friend that's special and his name is called John. God bless you my dear friend thank you for eevrything all your kind comments, and listening and encouraging it means a lot. distance is no barriers to a true and dear friend. God bless you and keep you xxx all my Love diane xxx