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Fairy Freckles

Fairy freckles fade with your smile Once bright as the s’mores summer stars In midnight. Then… something captured you. It took you to a darkness where Stars once bright as the s’mores summer Couldn’t be seen. And… some monster… It took you to a darkness where I didn’t even see you, you Couldn’t be seen. And… some monster.. Tortured you, leaving mental scars. I didn’t even see you, you Were too good at hiding as it Tortured you, leaving mental scars. In midnight… something captured you. You Were too good at hiding as your Fairly freckles faded with your smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2016 9:23:00 PM
Evie Beaty, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:46:00 PM
;) SKAT
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Evie :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:02:00 AM
Hi Evie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:12:00 AM
Evie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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