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Fairest Luna

Fairest Luna, hung so bright Light iridescent unto night Bring joyand wonder to young and old Ageless and beautiful to behold! As sun rules day infusing its light His constant watch to keep you in sight In granite pavilions you rest and sleep An amazing splendor the world to see ~*~

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2013 3:41:00 PM

beautiful write, Audrey. I love reading your old and new posts x

John Rhinem

Date: 7/9/2010 7:50:00 PM

.... ~ I think that I shall be looking greatly forward unto, watching "Your Poetic Splendors" grow ~ Smile, I believe that "You" shall be a treasure someday, for many lives to behold...."My Love to You Always," John! ~ Smile, I shall see You again tomorrow and, until then, "Have A Very Beautiful Night, 'Precious Carey Audrey,'" Bye Dear!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 7/9/2010 7:45:00 PM

Smile ~ "Completely Beautiful" ~ "Yes," this seemed to be the perfect write -- So soft and sweet this reflection it seems, of a very beautiful soul ~ "Your Creativity & Verse, Are Taking Steps Towards Astonding Dear Lady!!!" ~ The images are brilliant and, leave the reader within such a peaceful and tranquil state of, thinking that "You Are Very Special" ~ ....Cont....

John Freeman

Date: 7/6/2010 8:23:00 PM

This is a beautiful flowing verse,Audrey. Thank you graciously for your gracious comment today. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 7/6/2010 11:08:00 AM

Graceful and beautiful is this is this poem's presentation, Audrey. Congratulations on it graceful presentation. Also thank you for your graceful comment today. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 7:37:00 AM

A magnificent tribute to Luna's "ageless beauty, Audrey! Really liked the imagery and rhyme as well. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/6/2010 7:27:00 AM

Nice tribute to "Godess Luna", Audrey! Enjoyed your write this afternoon and thank you for commenting on "Night Flight"...Have a nice week. Love, Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 5:57:00 AM

A beautiful write about the moon goddess--me too, I've been enchanted with it-- wishing you the best in the conetst and read your comment in my blog, sorry I just read it now-- no worries in not being able to join my contest--will be posting another one soon ;) --nikko :) enjoy your day!!

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/5/2010 9:12:00 PM

aw i like this a lot, but then the moon goddess was always my fave...mostly cause of sailor moon lol! thanks for the comment i still love her too just haven't watched actual tv in a long while no time for it :c i pretty much get everything in boxset if im interested. and no worries i would like to finish that collab when ever hes ready :D

Larry Belt

Date: 7/5/2010 12:45:00 PM

Awesome write Audrey....good luck in the contest....Larry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 12:25:00 PM

This is a very pretty little poem about Luna. Good luck in the contest, sweet Audrey! LUv, Andrea

Kimberly Palhegyi

Date: 7/5/2010 11:34:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem. Great use of words.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2010 11:09:00 AM

Audrey, I just love the images, best wishes for the contest as well.. Ps: totally agree with your take on being a child in today's world.. So time machine it is then :) thank you for the comment as well tc Wilma