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Fair Star Shine

Beauty is a voice, with which you sing your song, Sing it that our hearts maybe awakened. Beauty is the drum, with which you echo your tune, So beat it that our souls may leap out of their dark confines, and dance. For beauty is the texture your life's skin is made of, It is the array that covers your soul, Shine, shine on fair star. Glow, you are beautiful just the way you are, You are more than what the silver stained glass yells out, You are more than looks; curves and dress. Burn, fair star and warm the universe with that your unique fire. Burn!

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Jolene Cheyney

Date: 8/26/2016 8:43:00 PM

Very nice poem. He recognized that the one you speak to is unique and that that makes her beautiful. And that's truly awesome.

Skat A

Date: 8/9/2016 12:43:00 AM

Gerry, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2016 9:04:00 AM

Gerry, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@