Fair and Square

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All hook wings in a row Kick in, kick out -- do-si-do One to the left, two to the right Turn the hens real tight Two-step down the aisle with a chick A swig of Bud Light does the trick Promenade hen to her chair It’s the mother-in-law, to be fair Grab your girl by the hand Don’t give her time to stand Now twirl the lass twice Her legs displayed rather nice Tap, tap on the spot when straight Pick up the beat by George Strait Amarillo by Morning When the old hen's snoring

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/23/2024 5:29:00 PM

your poem was filled with the energy that comes with square dancing. You used some unique square dancing words. Your poem was also humorous--a delightful read. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/20/2024 4:46:00 AM

Dear Suzette, your poem is an absolute delight! "All hook wings in a row" perfectly captures the fun and energy of a lively country dance. I loved how the imagery and playful rhythm made me feel like I was right there on the dance floor. The humor and charm are infectious—it's impossible not to smile while reading it. You’ve truly captured the spirit of a joyful, twirling night out. - Blessings, Daniel

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/20/2024 5:55:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment, Daniel. I love to dance :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2024 9:19:00 AM

Very cute. I want to try this one too. I square danced in 6th grade but often I had to take the man's part. Loved it

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/19/2024 10:02:00 AM

I only had the one experience of square dancing (it is not a "thing" out here). Having just been confirmed being pregnant, I had a great time with the workout. Most guys were hogging the bar, so it was mostly us woman dancing. Loved it :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/18/2024 7:28:00 AM

Love your title, Suzette! Cute!

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/18/2024 8:31:00 AM

I was at a total loss as to what title to use ... :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2024 11:46:00 AM

What a wonderful/fun ~ write/picture. I enjoyed reading it. Wish I was there. Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........

Suzette Richards
Date: 5/17/2024 9:52:00 PM

It is a fun contest idea by Crystal. Check it out. Have a great weekend as well. Paula :)