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Failure

Every difficulty is starting like a drop And all they have gathered to make up a sea I have started becoming someone else and feel can never become whom i wanted to be. It feels like I am sailing tide full of water and uncertain to see any coast and land on some shore seems like life has nothing any better with happiness a dream and love no more Everyday is becoming a new challenge for me Problems have gathered and solution I don't see Its very certain no one believes me My past always suggests its hard to trust me. Sorrow I have gathered and unhappiness shall I give the deeds I have done no one will forgive from lies to truth a hard path to perceive And I have done it all now with nothing to deceive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/21/2016 3:43:00 PM
Ashwin Pagare, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:10:00 PM
Ashwin, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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