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Below is the poem entitled Failure which was written by poet Ashwin Pagare. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Every difficulty is starting like a drop
And all they have gathered to make up a sea
I have started becoming someone else
and feel can never become whom i wanted to be.
It feels like I am sailing tide full of water
and uncertain to see any coast and land on some shore
seems like life has nothing any better
with happiness a  dream and love no more 

Everyday is becoming a new challenge for me
Problems  have gathered and solution I don't see
Its very certain no one believes me
My past always suggests its hard to trust me.
Sorrow I have gathered and unhappiness shall I give
the deeds I have done no one will forgive
from lies to truth a hard path to perceive
And I have done it all now with nothing to deceive.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Ashwin, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"