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Failure

(01/08/2011) He catches dreams in struggling minds He extracts them into a darkened one Sends them back into our thoughts Will haunt our reality and kill us slowly Not going crazy is more than lucky!' Does he even exist? It was my same question Once, he grabbed my wrist His grey abstract existence, only I could see My luck has fled freely I gave my left strength as a wimp I could feel he writes my obituary My hopes had turned to grim scheme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/7/2011 5:00:00 PM
Dinda my Poet friend... Your work is always so original and out in front... Pleasure to read you today... and your comment always make me smile...Thank you for that...luv Michael
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:12:00 PM
very creative work Dinda.. a touch of the macabre in your lines of a spirit seeking life out of your soul.. so intense.. luv the grey abstrat existence line.. very powerful luv..
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