Failed Attempt At Dizain For Contest

I tried a dizain. This is the best I could do. Ababbccdcdc Alone in her room, she studied the mirror Devastatingly aware, her face was plain Rubbing her eyes, in hopes to see clearer Only to find, all her efforts, in vain She shifted focus, to keep herself sane But the mirror taunted, til she returned Deceitfully causing, her, grave concern Relentless picking, poking and mocking The jabs, lacerations, stings and burns The expectations of girls, is shocking And holds too much power, to be unlearned