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Fail To See

Darkness Our minds fail to see Sunshine We have anxiety on the mind We live with stress At times it gets the best Sleepless Like a fly A constant pest We're stronger than this These scars on our wrists Tell you differently In a world filled with chaos Feeling like everything is off I want my life back To be back on track To see the sun again To live To breathe Not stress over things out of my control I'll stand my ground I'll never leave Link to my author page on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/dennismichaelbaze?ref=hl&ref_type=bookmark

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 8:44:00 PM

Nice to read this one again, Dennis... LINDA--

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/27/2014 6:55:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dennis. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:14:00 PM

Dennis, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 5:32:00 PM

Dennis,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2014 6:24:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dennis :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)