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Fading Like a Flower

To become a man at seven As my brother lay dying At such an early age Life to be trying Awaiting the news I,m now crying through my tears Without my brother Future fears Believing there's hope Maybe angels will say Take care of your brother For with you he will stay Down the corridor i wait As i hear the doors A Doctor appears As my tears froze To my father he says With a handshake he sighs We just couldn't save him We did all that we tried I felt my tears melt The ice in my eyes We never got the chance To say our goodbyes Dad turns to me as i look in his eyes The look of a parent Knowing their son has just died He held me close as we broke down and cried Through broken tears, he says to thee James my son, it's just you and me We have lost Billy to a higher power But he went in his sleep Fading like a flower " Dedicated to my brother Billy, knocked down in front of me at the age of 9 " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/me.php

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Date: 8/26/2015 4:53:00 PM
Awesome write, and I know that it's true, I wrote one about My Brother Bill. I guess William was a good name :)
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Date: 9/30/2015 3:06:00 PM
Indeed Debbie, William is a good name :) James :)
Date: 8/30/2009 4:49:00 AM
James,..a beautiful poem my friend. I'm sure you shed tears writing this, as I did reading it. God bless you and yours !!!! james
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Date: 6/18/2009 1:09:00 PM
God Bless, James. This was tragic. Time doesn't heal all wounds. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2009 3:52:00 PM
James, this poem is beautiful beautiful, it made me cry, I cannot imagine how you felt as a 7 year old, to lose your brother, who must of been your hero, I lost my Mum last month, we did not have the chance to say goodbye, I got there when she has already lost consciousness.. Wonderful write James, and I feel for your loss, so much, but your brother would be so proud of you, jo xx
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Date: 6/12/2009 11:48:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your brother. This is such a heartfelt piece. It's one of the most difficult things for a family to face--tragic for a boy of seven. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 6/11/2009 2:34:00 PM
James, I am so sorry for your loss. How terrible that must have been for you to witness. Please know that I understand the loss of a sibling. Mine has been gone four and a half years now. We lost him to an accident at the age of 43. Blessings on you today, friend. Donna
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Date: 6/10/2009 8:39:00 PM
Well this piece is just a tear jerking, heart wrenching write. How difficult it would be to lose someone at such a tender age. I am deeply sorry. Tragic but, beautifully written piece of sorrow dear James.
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Date: 6/10/2009 6:38:00 PM
I am so very sorry..I dont think you ever really get over something like that.BG
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Date: 6/10/2009 6:21:00 PM
The first stanza simply captures all feeling-it is beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss
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Date: 6/10/2009 3:26:00 PM
James, family loss is the absolute worst.... I'm tearing, bye, jmg
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Date: 6/10/2009 2:32:00 PM
This is very Sad.Im really Sorry for your loss James.
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:12:00 PM
Heartfelt,sad and deep---Fading like a flower---but brightning like the sun in heaven---beautiful----------charma
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