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Fading Hibiscus

Fading pink Petals, Resolute to die,drooping Towards gravel grave. Sprinklers cast,their last goodbye, Daybreak:whites now your color.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/6/2016 2:58:00 AM
This is a good Tanka, meaning I like it despite my inexperience with that form. I enjoy the line 'white now the new colour, since all colours mingle to white...Many wishes, Kai
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