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Fading Fall

September sun setting low, Fall in all its golden glow; Anticyclones hold transient sway As mist forms ,at the close of day. Dogwood,jasmine,marram grass In flower ,as pressure fills the barometer glass; Evening primrose in scented bloom Fill Autumn with pungent perfume. Sycamore seeds twirl and twist Onto a fairy-ring fungus tryst; Stink horn capped with slime, As carrion beetles pass the time. Bramblings feast on bountiful mast , As the Autumnal harvest dwindles fast; Yellowed leaves drift and decompose Into next year's cellulose. Winter migrants with welcome calls As the Indian Summer falters,and falls; Nature's tempo tarries,then slows As all creation begins to doze.

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Date: 9/6/2010 2:52:00 PM
Really Loved this Poem, Brian. Masterfully done. What's it doing down here? congratulations to you!
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:01:00 PM
You have created a vivid picture of fall. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:48:00 PM
Love all the poetic devices! And the little critters! Hope all is well for you? Your friend Debbie
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:03:00 AM
Brian I love the image you conjure up with this write.. Congratulations to you ;) hope you will have a stunning day further ~ rdgs Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM, Brian. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:10:00 PM
wonderful pem, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:58:00 PM
Amazing descriptive poem, Brian. Love all the images and the clever rhyme scheme. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:53:00 PM
Im so glad you came baqck and enterd this in the contest..Congrats to you Mr Strand. I was excited to see your name. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:38:00 PM
My wedding photos are on my blog now if u want to view and enjoy... only ten allowed ..its the max now according to the system changes..luv..
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:37:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM in the Fall contest... enjoy your special honor this happy moment my friend..with luv..
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