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Fading Breath

I was only ten, when an illness visited me; within days, it made me dehydrated and weak. I had to support myself to go to the sink to sip some water; my mouth almost had no saliva! One night, my parents rushed me to hospital, for the gates of the afterlife were beginning to open for me. I couldn't feel the drip needles getting through my skin; my senses were lost. Visions of a white place I saw; a place my soul probably stepped foot. My mother was awake beside me, all through the night. Death was much closer to me than I imagined..... Poem Theme: Near Death Experience

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Date: 10/25/2014 2:06:00 AM
oh i know that place thank you for sharing bless you powerful piece of writing
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Date: 10/23/2014 2:20:00 PM
Glad you are here to tell of this event...cheers Tim
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/24/2014 12:35:00 AM
I'm glad too Tim. I realized that life is not something we should take for granted.

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